In Response to “When the need won’t break”

This is in response to SubGirl’s poem When the need won’t break.

Lost in the dark womb of her need,
head bowed and her chest heav­ing,
eyes snap open when a deep voice
finally acknowl­edges from behind,
 “Good girl.”

Rais­ing her head in relief,
eyes still unfo­cused but unneeded;
rough, ten­der fin­gers touch­ing her face
brush­ing damp, mat­ted hair away.
 “I am here now.”

Brav­ing the tini­est of smiles,
eyes sparkling with stars,
dry mouth barely work­ing,
she whis­pers,
 “Mas­ter, I waited for you.”

A warm, dry, mas­sive hand cup­ping her cheek;
she turns to kiss its palm
and sighs con­tent­edly
as another hand grasps her hair,
 “I knew that you would.”

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sparklingtears September 13, 2009 at 10:43 AM

This gets better each time I read it. What power and beauty, you are.

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Dreamwalker September 13, 2009 at 1:08 PM

The beauty I describe is not in me, my dear. It is in the one that waits, it is in the heart that surrenders; beauty is in the eyes where stars find their home.

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