Comments on: You Own Him

By: Ranat

Ranat — Mon, 02 Aug 2010 01:11:50 +0000

I really enjoyed the rhythm of this.

Shidonae — Sun, 29 Nov 2009 00:29:06 +0000

Can I own air I need to breathe?
Can I own the sun that warms me?
Can I own rain that brings life?

Is it possible to own that which brings me alive?

How can I own you, when all that you do is for me?
How can I own you when I am the satellite caught in your heaven,
held in your orbit?

How can I own you when you are the center that I resonate from?

thesindoll — Fri, 20 Nov 2009 13:28:05 +0000

Something beautiful to be.

Subpoet — Thu, 05 Nov 2009 02:13:37 +0000

WOW… Powerful, Moving, Epic.… WOW

sparklingtears — Thu, 29 Oct 2009 04:55:34 +0000

And when you have surrendered all that you are
given all that you have to give
held out your heart for his sacrifice

And when he walks away
the light of the stars die
the heart of the submissive crumbles

her ownership of you was fleeting
if ever at all
but it lives in her very soul

crushed
bruised
battered

but it lives, forever, in her soul

Nick — Tue, 27 Oct 2009 12:51:32 +0000

Sutch a good girl ☺ sitting quietly over there *goes over and softly strokes her neck as she looks up at me smiling*

Meg — Sun, 25 Oct 2009 06:10:09 +0000

Fans self and goes to sit quietly for a bit.….

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